Fiction Writing ~ The Passionate Journey! The Blog of Writing Coach, Emily Hanlon

Monday, November 29, 2004

An Excellent Article on Agents

Reprinted from Firstwriter.com newsletter

Seven essential points on literary agentsBy Jill Nagle, Founder and Principal
GetPublished, guerilla guidance for your writing adventure
An excerpt from How to Find A Literary Agent Who Can Sell Your Book for Top Dollar
www.FindTheRightAgent.com

As an aspiring author, you may have heard, “if your work is really good, you can get an agent. Getting the work into shape is the hard part. If you get the work into shape, the right agent will follow”. Is it really that simple? Well, yes and no.

The seven essential points below prepare you for what to expect when seeking an agent, or literary representative.

Point 1: fiction or nonfiction? Differences in approach

As a novelist, or fiction writer, you need to complete your whole book, format it properly, and find an agent who specializes in selling novels. If you write nonfiction (self-help, how-to, memoir), forget about writing the whole book, unless you want to self-publish. Instead, write your book proposal.

A book proposal is like a business plan for your book. Its job is to convince the publisher to part with money so you can get paid to write your book.

In either case, to minimise your chances of rejection, you’ll need to have your proposal or manuscript polished before approaching an agent.

Point 2: That someone calls themself an agent says nothing about what they can do for you

Some things haven’t changed in the century since the first literary agent was born. Today, anyone can still hang out a shingle and say they’re an agent – many people do. Not all agents are effective, ethical, or even sell any books.

Jill’s Guerilla Caveat
Don’t settle for just any agent. Agents vary tremendously in their effectiveness and in what they sell well. Get your proposal (for nonfiction writers) or manuscript (for novelists) into tip-top shape, then go for the agent who has a proven track record selling work similar to your own.

Point 3: Membership in the Association of Author’s Representatives (United States) indicates that the agent has agreed to abide by the AAR’s code of ethics
This professional guild for agents requires, among other things, that an agent:

has sold at least ten literary properties (i.e. books) in the eighteen months prior to application for membership; and
does not charge any fees for reading or evaluating authors’ work.
However, not every legitimate US agent belongs to the AAR. Many extremely successful agents opt out of AAR membership. A comparable agency called the Association of Author’s Agents operates in Britain.

Point 4: Legitimate agents earn their living by selling to legitimate publishers
the rights to publish authors’ books
In return for writing your book and granting a legitimate publisher the rights to print it, the publisher gives you, the author, a percentage of whatever the book makes, otherwise known as a “royalty”. In return for brokering the deal and acting as your advocate, you in turn give your agent a percentage (usually 15 per cent) of this royalty.

This is how legitimate agents make their money. They pick good literary prospects for the publishers to consider, who rely on them to reduce the time and energy it would otherwise take to wade through the enormous amount of submissions the publishers receive.

Publishers know the legitimate agent’s living depends on being able to separate the wheat from the chaff, so they tend to look more seriously at submissions from reputable agents.

To reiterate, legitimate agents get paid through commissions on book rights only, period. If an agent charges you any money, except a small fee for expenses (and many people believe agents shouldn’t charge authors even for those; they should simply be considered the cost of doing business), they have little incentive to sell books.

Successful agents use a well-established network of relationships with editors in legitimate publishing houses. They know the right editors to call for the particular projects that come their way. They don’t have time to do anything but sell book rights, because selling book rights is how they make their money.

Aside from selling the rights to publish your book in your own country, many other possibilities exist for making money from your book both within your own country and abroad. These include translating the book and selling it overseas, making an audio recording of the book, or having the book used as the basis for a movie. The legal permission to do these things are called foreign rights, subsidiary rights and options, respectively.

To help you make the most money possible from your book, your agent should be able to negotiate for the subsidiary and foreign rights to remain with you, and then work either on their own or with someone else, to help you sell and make yet more money on sales from those rights.

Jill’s Guerilla Caveat
Apart from those agents who are simply mediocre, watch out for scammers – there are plenty! Apart from trusting your gut, and not paying an agent, avoid any agent who:

insists you hire a particular editorial or consulting service (this is different from making a referral, or even better, two or three referrals and letting you interview them and make up your own mind);
refers you to a publisher who wants to charge you money;
suggests representing multiple works of yours simultaneously (unless they have a really good reason for thinking this is a good idea – see Q&A below).
Agents who profit from upfront fees for reading or handling manuscripts, who affiliate themselves financially with editorial, coaching or publishing services, or who claim to need your money for any other purpose probably aren’t selling the rights to your book for a living.

Why should they, when aspiring writers who don’t know any better are kind enough to bankroll their other enterprises?

Point 5: At their best, agents advocate for author interests, and earn their commissions by:

using their inside information, reputations and well-oiled relationships with editors to approach just the right publishers for your book – especially the increasing number of those publishers who won’t take unagented submissions;
applying their contractual and negotiating expertise to garnering higher advances, more rights and a lot of other stuff you might not be aware of;
helping you refine both the form and content of your book so that it appeals to the publishers they plan to approach;
intervening on your behalf if you get into a disagreement with the publisher;
assisting you with making long-term decisions about sequels, options, subsidiary rights, next steps and other aspects of your career.

Point 6: Agents reject 99 per cent of all material that comes their way
The best and most reliable way to up your odds of getting published is to a) research your market, b) know and communicate to the agent via a perfect query letter how your work fits in with and stands out from others in its class, c) deliver an original, well-written, impeccably formatted manuscript or proposal, then d) choose an agent who is obviously interested in and has a record of selling work like yours. Read that again.

Point 7: Don’t initiate contact with a phone call – really. Approach an agent with a query letter instead
Unless you are famous (and even then), approach an agent with a query letter. A query letter introduces you and your book idea, and invites the agent to see your book proposal or manuscript. We’ll give you a sample query letter below.

Don’t email unless the agent specifically states somewhere in print or on the internet that they welcome email queries. Also, don’t call with general questions about their qualifications.

Agents who haven’t expressed interest in representing your work generally will not consent to have you interview them unless you’re a journalist calling to give them publicity.

Once an agent has expressed interest in your work, you can and should ask questions of them, which we’ll cover below, then take up to a week (or longer, by mutual agreement) to decide whether to accept their offer of representation.

If you’ve read this far, congratulations – you now have a solid introduction to agents, a crucial piece of the mainstream publishing world. However, as you might guess, finding exactly the right agent for your work, so you can beat those 99 per cent rejection odds, takes a bit more effort.

To learn more about how to up your odds of getting published by joining forces with exactly the right agent, get a copy of How to Find A Literary Agent Who Can Sell Your Book for Top Dollar

Jill Nagle is a published author and principal of GetPublished, which provides ghostwriting, coaching, consulting, teleclasses and more to aspiring and ascending authors. She has been helping other writers get published for the last decade.

Saturday, November 27, 2004

The Powerful "What If" Game in Storytelling

The fastest way to open up a story, unleash the passion of characters and uncover story line is to play the "What If" game. For example, your character was in a fight, got scared and ran away. That worked pretty well, but you don’t know where to go next. Ask yourself, "What if my character doesn’t run away? What if she faces down her enemy?" So you try this new "what if", but the passion still isn’t there.
What next?
Ask another "what if" question, such as, "What if the character pulls out a gun?"
Where did that thought come from? There’s not even a potential for a gun in the scene. Aha—what if the character pulls out an emotional gun? For example, if in your first version, the character is silent or passive in the face of a verbal assault, what if he shouts? (Notice that in asking what if, she turned into he.) 
What if he screams? Rants and rages?
What if the character is married? What if the character isn’t married? Has children? Has just been fired? 
What if the character is ten years older? Ten years younger? Has just fallen in love? Broken up with a lover? Divorced? Is about to go into bankruptcy? 
What if the character is a hit man? Lives in the country instead of the city? Lives in a poor neighborhood instead of a middle class neighborhood? Is really a writer and not a doctor? Is a homeless woman instead of a wealthy suburbanite? Is a thief? Steals out of necessity? Steals for thrills? 
The "what ifs" are endless!
Think of a story or character. It can be one you're working on or you can just make up one right now. Make list of at least ten "what ifs" for the story and character.
Which of the "what ifs" sounds the most exciting? Write the story using that what if and see how the story changes. Invite change. Don’t be afraid to overwrite. It is easier to pull back from overwriting than it is to build up from work that is thinly drawn. Expect to write garbage. Don’t worry if you find yourself telling instead of showing. In fact, don’t worry. If you worry, you won’t take chances and you won’t have fun. This page has been adapted from The Art of Fiction Writing or How to Fall Down the Rabbit Hole Without Really Trying.
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Friday, November 26, 2004

A Nice Write Up in a Local Press

Polishing the 'write' skills as a group

CATHERINE L. FOLEY
THE PATENT TRADER
(Original publication: November 25, 2004)

Emily Hanlon helps writers find the magical moment.

The Yorktown writing coach leads 10-week workshops three times a year for a small group of writers, hungry for the creative journey, she said.

Her goal is to guide writers working on fiction or creative nonfiction, children's books and memoirs as they uncover the complexities and joys of their creative passion, and open to the characters living inside them. "That's the magical moment. We get out of our own way and our characters come alive. We can close down and let the characters write the story."

Hanlon, 59, has been teaching writing for 30 years and said creativity involves a lot of challenge and risk. For writers, especially those working on longer pieces, it's essential to get outside support and feedback, she said. "I'm teaching writing from the perspective of the creative journey, and opening people to their creative passion at the same time teaching them technique."

For women writers looking for a deeper creative experience, Hanlon hosts annual, week-long writers' retreats all over the world. Next summer, she'll take a group of 20 women to Glastonbury, England. "It's really an exploration of your creativity funneled through writing. It's an exploration of who you are as a creative person once you can quiet that inner critic. It's a very exhilarating experience, a very freeing experience."

Hanlon also does one-on-one coaching, in person or on the telephone.

Wednesday, November 24, 2004

Why Do You Write?

This was a very popular thread on the message board before it was hacked.
I found it very inspirational and I thought we might resurrect it.

Please click "comment" below, write your feelings and post.

And don't be shy about being the first person to comment!

Here's something I've written:

One day as I was going through an old journal, I read:
“Sit, listen, hear the song of your soul. Always there. Always singing. Always waiting. Patient. Until the end of time. You. You. Only one you. Reach in now, through the channel of your art….”

This was my journal. Clearly I had written these words, but I had no memory of them, and my first thought was “Who wrote this?” Its wisdom filled my heart and its gentle guidance calmed me. I knew the words were a glimpse into the true offerings of the Muse and the gift of my writing. I thought, yes, it’s true, I have reached into myself and found myself in unexpected ways through my writing, found truths about myself and my life that would have remained hidden otherwise. Through my stories and my characters I have heard the song of my soul.

But how to keep the channel open? How not to forget, as I have done time and again, that my writing is a pathway to my truest self, often so different from the busy self that runs my day to day life?

It’s not easy and, I realized, it’s exquisitely easy at the same time. A maddening, mystifying paradox, whose truth brings me to the core of why I write, whose revelations I don’t always understand or, more importantly don’t always want to understand. And yet if I did, if I embraced the song of my soul that I hear through my writing, might my writing and my life flow from a calmer, richer place?



Friday, November 19, 2004

Questions on dramatic tension and character development answered...

Question 1 from Cynthia:

As a first time novelist I am finding that my scenes where I need to give technical information to move the plot ahead in time (i.e. showing my artist character and his new assistant framing out a canvas) tend to be a bit ho-hum no matter how lightly I go on the facts--very different from my scenes where emotions run deep--so much more engaging. how can i change this?

Emily's response:

Less is definitely more in a situation such as this. I have personally run into this situation while writing historical novels. What to do with all the history or all the research one has accumlated... A problem is that we, the writer, usually loves the research and so first time around, we write too much. Alas, too, I am sure you have read novels where too much of the writer's research has been left in and you, as the reader, thumb through it until the dialogue of action begins again.

So write whatever you need or love to write and then put it aside for a few days and go back and cut cut cut. But cut from this perspective: what does your point of view character see or feel about the moment. In Cynthia's example, what do your character see, think, feel about framing out the canvas? What is going on between them as they do it? I have no idea what is happening in Cynthia's story, but say, for example, that the two characters are attracted to each other. Then there might well be something sensual about the way they interact with the framing of the photo. This creates tension. Then again, what if the characters don't much like each other...then the way they handle the materials and talk about them would grow from their animosity and tension would come from that.

As most things it story telling, the answer comes down to point of view. If your point of view character doesn't see or feel something about the action or scene, don't put it in. This will keep the description much tighter and keep it related to the character, which is what usually interests the reader most anyway.

Question 2 from Bob:

Perhaps you could offer some advice or tell me where to look for an answer. My problem is character development. I can come up with rivers of excellent story lines but I really suffer when it comes to fleshing out a main character. How can I sharpen my character development skills?

Emily's response:

This is a very very complicated and alluring question, which can not be answered simply. Nothing is more important than character development. What I recommend is not to predetermine anything about your character -- not the way he or she looks, acts or thinks. You want your character to reveal themselves, to emerge from the inside out not from the outside in.

Interviewing your character is a good way of finding out what he or she is about. Also, not telling in your story writing but showing. Show don't tell means putting the story into scene as opposed to narrative.

My book, The Art of Fiction Writing, has a lot of material on character development and goes into detail on the technique of interviewing your characters. In fact, there are over 50 interview questions both in the workbook and on the tape. The Art of Fiction Writing is on sale right now. You can explore it at http://www.thefictionwritersjourney.com/A_book_on_writing.htm

This is an endlessly fascinating subject and there will be more on it in the blog. Also check out the rest of the blog, as there is material on character development already here.



Thursday, November 18, 2004

Post a Comment, Ask a Question!

The blog page is now interactive.

Please feel free to post a comment or ask a question on writing and/or the creative process.


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Help expand The Fiction Writer's Journey Community and make this blog page yours, too!

on the journey,
Emily


What makes a writer's movie??

At long last, I watched the film, Monster, and was utterly overwhelmed by it.
The acting and the story line. Director and actors alike delve fearlessly into the light and dark of the human psyche and are not afraid of the places that human passion takes them. Althought a largely dark film, it is so interesting that it is a love story, too.

If you haven't seen it, I highly recommend it.
Another powerful, dark movie, a great writer's movie that doesn't pull punches when it comes to human passions and the places it takes us, is Breaking the Waves with Emily Watson.

As as writer, it is so important, I think, to watch your own emotions during and after watching movies like these. What do they open up for you? What do they close down? How can you use the emotions to open up your own writing.

A wonderful exercise is to take a scene or incident from movies such as these ... scenes that clearly open to other scenes that are not actually in the movie. And use what the movie didn't show as a jumping off for a story or scene of your own.

Jumpstarting your writing from movies such as these can be very powerful.

What do you think?

The blog is now set up for you to add comments of your own.

Who is the writer in you?

Who is writing your stories? How intimately do you know that part of you?
Do you trust yourself to write in total freedom or are you afraid of exposing
yourself? To whom? Mother? Father? Child? God? Self?

Have you met any new parts of yourself on your writing journey?
Do you delight in these parts? Take them on a walk? Out for coffee, tea, wine or a beer? You might be surprised...

Sound nutty?
Ask yourself how far you will go in letting your imagination guide you.
The imagination is like a muscle. The more you use it, the stronger it gets!

"We are all guilty of crime the great crime of not living life to the full. But we are all potentially free. We can stop thinking of what we have failed to do and do whatever lies within our power. What those powers that are in us may be no one has truly dared to imagine. That they are infinite we will realize the day we admit to ourselves that imagination is everything. Imagination is the voice of daring."

--Henry Miller

Tuesday, November 16, 2004

Message from the Muse

"Writing is the ax that breaks the frozen sea within us."

~Franz Kafka

Saturday, November 13, 2004

Of General non-writing interest... protecting your cell phone numbers....

A directory of cell phone numbers will be published soon. This opens the
door to solicitors calling our cell phones using up our minutes. The
Federal Trade Commission has set up a do not call list. You must call FROM
the number you wish to register. The number is 1-888-382-1222, OR you can
click on the link below to register your cell phones on line.
https://www.donotcall.gov/register/Reg.aspx

Wednesday, November 10, 2004

What to wear while writing...


A writing friend sent me this description of what the Russian writer Gogol wore while writing. It might be just the thing to get the creative juices flowing each day!

“Before me stood Gogol in the following fantastic get-up: in place of boots—long Russian woolen stockings, which reached above the knee; instead of a jacket—a velvet spencer [short, double-breasted overcoat] over a flannel camisole, with a large, bright-colored scarf wrapped around his neck and a raspberry-colored, velvet kokoshnik, embroidered in gold, on his head, quite similar to the headdress of Finnish tribeswoman.”

Sunday, November 07, 2004

A Letter from Your Inner Writer

Have you ever conversed with your Inner Writer?

Have you considered that you have one?

If you haven't, you have a real treat in store.

Right now, get out a paper and pen (better than the computer)
and ask your Inner Writer to write you a letter. Perhaps your Inner Writer has a special name for you. Perhaps you have a question for your Inner Writer. If so, write down the question for the IW to answer.

Then, whether you have a question or not, put pen to paper and allow the IW to write. Don't hesitate or second guess. However, if you hear judgment or any naysaying then you are you letting your Inner Critic write instead of the Inner Writer. Tell the Inner Critic to go away!!

Try letting your Inner Writer write to you -- even if your Inner Critic is telling you that this is nuts and this person, Emily Hanlon, whoever she is, is a total nut case!!

If you like or are surprised by what you've written, email it to me and perhaps I will post it here on the blog.

emily@emilyhanlon.com

Letting your Inner Writer write to you -- believing you have an Inner Writer -- is part of the magic of being a writer.

Have fun!!

Monday, November 01, 2004

Television Writers - Call for Entries

Scriptapalooza Inc.


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Scriptapalooza 6th Annual Television Writing Competition
http://www.scriptapaloozaTV.com
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CALL FOR ENTRIES

Deadline is November 15, 2004

Scriptapalooza TV, has grown in reputation and
stature over the last three years with several of
its past winners gaining access to top television
production companies and literary representatives.

Barbara Schwartz has won a 2003 Daytime Emmy
for Outstanding Children's Animated Program for
the TV series, RUGRATS, produced by
Klasky Csupo. Her animation work is a direct
result of her finalist placement in the Scriptapalooza
TV competition.

Scott Gray, also a 2003 Daytime EMMY winner, for
Outstanding Children's Animated Program for
the TV series, RUGRATS. "Winning the competition
helped get me to the top of industry "to read" piles
and I was able to sign with CAA", says Gray.

Deadline is November 15, 2004

The three categories include existing 1 hour spec scripts,
existing half hour spec scripts and pilots.

www.scriptapaloozaTV.com or email us at
info@scriptapalooza.com or call 323.654.5809

Love After Love, a poem

by Derek Walcott, 1996 Nobel Prize winner for literature

The time will come, when,
with elation,
you will greet yourself arriving
at your own door,
in your own mirror.
And each will smile at the other’s welcome,
and say, “Sit here, Eat. Relax.”
You will love again this stranger who is your Self.
Give wine. Give bread.
Give back your heart,
to itself,
to this stranger who has loved you
all your life.
whom you ignored for another,
but who knows you by heart.

Sale on All of Emily's Books, Tapes and Turtle Jewelry

Emily's books, tapes and turtle jewelry are on sale, 20% off,
until November 15.

> http://www.thefictionwritersjourney.com/petersburg_reviews.htm
"A lush and boldly imagined recreation of the 1905 "dress rehearsal" for the Bolshevik Revolution of 1917, Petersburg smoothly mixes history and fiction, realism and romance... Characters are either fictitious or composite portraits based on real people, but all carry conviction and verisimilitude to real life. The scenes in which they take part-scenes of passion, plotting, violence in the streets and confrontations with the dreaded secret police, the Okhrana-succeed each other at a mounting pace."

— Publisher's Weekly


http://www.thefictionwritersjourney.com/Art_of_Fiction_order_form.htm


http://www.thefictionwritersjourney.com/Turtle_as_symbol_of_creativity.htm
The turtle is a great image for the creative journey! Why?
Because the creative process is slow and
you have to stick out your neck to get any place!!

And more....
http://www.thefictionwritersjourney.com/Art_of_Fiction_order_form.htm