Fiction Writing ~ The Passionate Journey! The Blog of Writing Coach, Emily Hanlon

Saturday, August 27, 2005

The Land of Betwixt and Between and the Imagination!


My most recent Writing Creativity and Ritual Retreat was held in August in Glastonbury, England. Glastonbury is a mystical place that feeds the imagination. It is a a place where the Land of Betwixt and Between is always near.

On the retreat, we explored the Land of Betwixt and Between
as a place of inspiration. You can travel there, too!

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To view, please go to:

http://www.thefictionwritersjourney.com/betwixt_and_between.htm

Wednesday, August 24, 2005

August Newsletter of The Fiction Writer's Journey

The August Newsletter, Writer-to-Writer, is now available at:
http://www.thefictionwritersjourney.com/Newsletter_August_2005.htm


In this Issue:

1. A Report from Glastonbury, England and the 2005 Writing, Creativity and Ritual Retreat:Journey into the Betwixt and Between Worlds and Walking the Labyrinth

2. Information on next year's Writing, Creativity and Ritual Retreat for Womento be held in the rain forest of Costa Rica, September 24-October 6, 2006.

3. Spirit of the Wind, Carry Me Home, A Monthly Gathering for the Creative Journeyer

4. A Message from the Muse

5. A Writing Prompt

http://www.thefictionwritersjourney.com/Newsletter_August_2005.htm

Monday, August 15, 2005

A Writing Exercise

The Dance of Creativity

Creativity is a subtle and magnificent dance between the rational and the intuitive, between the left and right parts of the brains, between technique and imagination. Both partners in this dance are absolutely necessary and are needed in equal proportion, which means that imagination is not more important than technique and visa versa. If you only live in the imagination, you will never get organized, you will never complete your story. However, if you start from the rational, linear, organizational part of the process, ( ie. Gotta have the perfect opening sentence and first paragraph… better yet, an outline…) you will never fall into the rich, passionate imagination or what has been called the “great seething sea of the unconscious”.

However, the main problem I have seen in my twenty-five years of teaching fiction writing is over-dependence on the rational part of the equation. A prime example of this is the adage, “Write what you know.”

Write what you know? How boring! Especially for the fiction writer. As Gertrude Stein said, “What will be best in your writing is what you really do not know now. If you knew it all it would not be creation but dictation.”

Paradoxically, when we write from the imagination we are writing what we “know” but from such a deep level of knowing that we don’t know that we know it until it is revealed in our writing. This is often the truer aspect of self, often the part that we do not readily show to the world, and sometimes do not show even to our self – at least not consciously.

So how do we access the deeper knowing? Remember I said that creativity is a dance between the known and unknown, the rational and intuitive. Here’s a perfect example of the give and take of the dance: start with the known but use it as a jumping off point, as a doorway into the unconscious. The key is not to be slavish to the known. This is especially true when you are working with autobiography, where what is “known” is largely based on memory. And memory is often faulty. In addition, autobiography is only your point of view. How about alternative points of view?

Here’s an exercise: take an incident from your life in which you are absolutely certain that you are the injured party. The easiest way to do this is to use an argument or a fight, which automatically holds dramatic tension.

1. See the argument or fight in your mind’s eye as a scene from a movie.

2. Write the scene keeping to your point of view (POV).

3. Put that scene aside and write another scene, this time using the other person’s point of view.

Remember that writing from the other person’s POV means that you disregard your POV. It is the other person’s inner thoughts and feelings that count. In this version, your feelings can be expressed only through dialogue and action.

It is important to be clear on point of view, which means getting inside the main character’s head, heart and gut, literally seeing the world through the character’s POV. So when you are in the “bad guy’s” POV, be as true to that POVas you are to your own. An excellent example of this is Crime and Punishment where Dostoevsky has Raskolnikov, who is not a criminal, put an ax into his landlady’s head. Thus begins one of the greatest novel ever written. Did Dostoevsky have to put an ax into anyone’s head to write this? Clearly not. And neither do you. But Dostoevsky needed to experience Raskolnikov’s physical journey as a murderer as well as his emotional journey from darkness to redemption.

William Faulkner wrote: “... the problems of the human heart in conflict with itself... alone can make good writing because only that is worth writing about, worth the sweat and the agony.”

Faulkner has given us a tough assignment, yet it is an assignment at which we much excel as fiction writers. The best way to succeed at this is to leave behind what you believe to be “true” and open yourself to the vast possibility of life experiences outside your own. As writers, we access the imagination, that cosmic place where everything is possible and the great expanse of human emotions resides.


How do we do this? Here are some suggestions:

1. Take chances. Be a risk taker.

2. Learn to be at home amidst the unknown.

3. Trust that order will ultimately arise out of chaos.

4. Write without needing your writing to make immediate sense.

5. Think of something you could never write about and then write about it.

6. Find people, a community where you can find non-judgmental support for your creativity.

7. Understand that writing from the imagination, “making up things” doesn’t mean that you’re childish, or worse, crazy. Know that in the cosmic realm of the imagination, you will find the truths passions, characters and stories for which your creativity hungers.

To end, I offer you this from Thomas Wolfe, a natural swimmer in the seething sea of the unconscious:

“It was a process that began in a whirling vortex and creative chaos and that proceeded
slowly at the expense of infinite confusion, toil and error toward clarification and the
articulation of an ordered and formal structure.”

For more exercises, explore my workbook, The Art of Fiction Writing

Sunday, August 14, 2005

The longest journey...

The longest journey is from the mind to the heart...

Anonymous

Some Thoughts on Solitude

In solitude I bequeath myself to myself.
In solitude I am.
In solitude the core of light envelops me.
In solitude I am.
This is the journey:
to enter the quiet, to enter the solitude of being
without busy-ness, without fear;
to find that space daily.
In the core of I Am.
To remember and accept
the invitation
to step in...

A Message from the Muse

"The symbol never gives itself completely to the light.
It invites thought precisely because it resides on the
threshold of darkness."


~ John O'Donohue

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Wednesday, August 10, 2005

A Walk on the Beach...

The gift of writing is a mystery. For years I thought my writing path was to be published and when I was published and published it was not enough. And so I began the journey into an exploration of the true gift of being a writer and what I have discovered is the path of the writer is one of soul.

Recently I was at a writing workshop on the beach and we went on a walking mediation.
I would like to share what I wrote. A note in case you do not know the reference. "Sitting zazen" is Zen mediation.

The Gulls

Gulls sit zazen around a dead fish.
I near and one gull screams
claiming the kill.
The others sit zazen.
I wonder how long the meditation lasts.
The fish is only one-quarter eaten.
Amidst so many white and gray robed monks,
the one gulls screams, saffron beak
claiming the kill.
The others stand, unmoving on spindly legs.
I wonder if I were a sea gull,
would all life be a prayer.

And then I walked on and noticed strange patterns in the waves that slowly rolled up the sand in an ever-expanding X pattern, eddying up the beach until dissolving in the foam and that magic place betwixt and between where the water meets the boundaries of sea and air. If I left my body to find that magical place betwixt and between, of unseen boundaries, what would I find?

What freedom lay in the magic places?

To travel there, I send my spirit into the diaphanous cosmos where water meets land and air. And seagulls sit zazen and the business of my life seems far away. There it is easy to see that all and everything is love and love is all and everything.

Betwixt and between, light and dark, neither exist, both exist, all exists. As I exist betwixt and between, in the alchemical moments of breathing and loving and living and fearing and laughter and hate, each is the other, a magical place of sitting zazen with the seagulls guarding their next meal.

Saturday, August 06, 2005

Reparenting My Inner Writer

As I have worked on one particular chapter in the novel I'm trying to write, I have made some surprising discoveries about myself.

One reason the writing was not coming across as "real" enough was that I was not letting myself use my own inner thoughts. I was hot on detail, description, atmosphere, and dialogue, but not much about the inner life of my Julie.

The writing was also making me very very anxious.

And suddenly, I had a big-time AH HA experience. It may sound obvious/easy, but for it to really hit home was a first for me. I realized how tragically little mothering my character Julie had. I also saw how her low self-esteem reflected some of mine. (This process has taken months.)

So I hit on the idea that I needed to with great creativity and love and passion try to remother/reparent this part of me who is so afraid of her own validity, anger, ideas, and successes. I haven't quite figured out how to do this, but the answer is in there somewhere boiling away. I've found myself looking at my hands and face with more compassion and respect. Rather disconcerting- like just getting to know me in a new way.

So, through fighting (it seems almost literally), to write about painful topics in a way that will be interesting for a reader, I have discovered things about myself I didn't know as well as writing a better chapter.

I am much more aware that I don't yet know how good my writing can become. The work I'm doing keeps getting deeper and in many cases better. So.......?

Claire, feeling battered but totally determined to finish this blasted/wonderful novel-process.

PS I hope this "blogs" ok. My first time doing this.

Wednesday, August 03, 2005

Thoughts on waking

In wonderment I greet the day --
not always easy
not always my mind's choice.

But my soul is here to dance,
and from my soul flows my words,
my stories, my characters, my path,
my truth.
And so I write.

Tuesday, August 02, 2005

Home from my writing retreat on Avalon!



Just back from my writing retreat, Writing, Creativity and Ritual, a Retreat for Women in Glastonbury, England. It was an intense, enlivening, challenging and transforming dance of creativity. Such a gift and inspiration to spend a week in a circle of women writers. And what better place for us to meet in such a circle than Glastonbury, which is thought to be the ancient isle of women: Avalon.



Glastonbury Tor. If you look closely, you can see the outline of a labyrinth that encircles this hill. The word "Tor" means hill. There are many "tors" in England, but Glastonbury Tor is one of the most famous. Some say that inside Glastonbury Tor is a labyrinth that was the site of ancient rituals.


We stayed in the Abbey House, which is on the grounds of ruins of the once great Glastonbury Abbey. And there we wrote, shared, explored, ate, drank, risked, laughed, danced, talked, alone and together, embraced our joys, faced our fears, each of us brave warriors of creativity in a glorious circle on the sacred ground.

I learned so much on this retreat as I walked a path that was sometimes filled with light, sometimes dark and shaded. Then, too, there was the labyrinth on the grounds of the Abbey House. This we walked as a group, slowly, purposefully ... Time and again I return to the labyrinth walk as the image for the journey that brought us slowly, insistently and ultimately gloriously to the center! This I embrace, then release, with the knowing that the image of the labyrinth is as ever-changing as the glorious mists on Glastonbury/Avalon's Tor. And then I return to the labyrinth, with its twists and turns, its path that is never the same. I look into it and see a meditation. I look into it, calmed by the knowing that the journey deepens, transforms and I can hardly wait to write again. As I write this, I am yet too tired yet to pick up the pages of my book; instead, I settle into the expectation and allow the hunger to grow, the hunger for my writing, my characters and the mystery of all that lies ahead.


Have you ever walked a labyrinth?

If you have, you will most likely respond to the following, that was part of our closing ritual.

If not, find a labyrinth to walk, if only in your imagination!




Walking the Labyrinth

I walk the labyrinth and I am _____

I walk the labyrinth and I leave behind _____

I walk the labyrinth and I see _____

I walk the labyrinth and I am _____

As I step into the center of myself I find _____


Next year Emily's Retreat goes to Costa Rica. www.awritersretreat.com